All Comments on 'Something New'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very nice

Enjoyed the detail and dialog. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Review

Nice story, well thought out but way too many words out of context and spelled wrong. Stumbling around word problems takes away some of the reading pleasure... Keep it up!

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