by ChickLicks
Exquisite. My favourite form of erotica… age difference, nice characters, authentic storytelling and the right degree of dirty. I was hard by page 2, which is a good indication of your erotic writing ability. More, please, as soon as you can manage it.
Certainly you can share with us the rest of this lovely story. Patiently waiting.....
This was so hot, but rooted in such realism that I was totally hooked. I’ve been ‘the older man’ in this type of situation and the emotions you describe are spot on. I also loved the humour in this story, with Becca’s unfinished pubic hair removal giving me a real belly laugh! This is the first of your stories that I’ve read, but I will definitely be seeking out more from your opus. Well done!
The best ,of the genre, that I've read. I'd welcome the opportunity to read more about these two (and Dennis.)
Excellent tale, well written. Wonderful how you really developed the characters of Becca and Nick, balancing their desires and insecurities; the vulnerabilities of each made the story so alive. Brava, Ms ChickLicks! (This wouldn’t have been set in Whitby perchance? That’s how I imagined it.)