by Fredoberto
Smarter move would be to go home secretly get every dollar under your control, close all the credit card accounts and then just leave. Possibly going to jail for assault is stupid.
You had is made in the shade till you left the incriminating evidence as a present.
Now comes the fuzz, the judge, and a 5 year sentence for assault with intent.
Very entertaining. Where I come from, a long yarn whose only purpose is to set up a <really> bad pun at the end is called a shaggy dog story. This is a purebred.
I wouldn't have given her the thumbs.
Just let her wonder when she didn't hear from Frank, then cringe in horror when she finds out what happened.
Then, in about six months just get a quiet divorce, never letting her know that you know!
The suspense will probably give her an ulcer!
Nothing like reading about a little assault and mutilation on an erotic story site. It's no wonder she cheated on this psychopath. I suppose he got away with it, too. Another "consequences" story without any consequences.
That said: "Frank in a sense?" That's funny shit. A long and disturbing route to get to that punchline, but whatever makes you giggle.
a story about a sick mind. Sure, I know there are psychopaths out there and they fit the description "some sort of inhuman, cold-blooded, unfeeling creature". Denials notwithstanding, his personality fits as do his actions.
would like to know what happened after she opened it and got her reading material
nice tale but it has no ending. he set himself up to go to jail with the body parts..
for a short flash tale not bad.
Some revenge stories are quite heavy handed. or light handed in this case. Not much imagination here.
Now that's a Christmas Story ! Lol.
I gave it two thumbs up !!!