All Comments on 'Sometimes, Things Just Happen Ch. 01'

Is the story over????

Love this! Looking forward to reading more!

i read it 4-5 yrs ago waited for 2nd part then forgot its name i searched it again for hours and days under noncon and petite section but couldnt find it left all the hopes and then found it today again as if it was destiny i feel like my eyes full with tears of joy when i least expected it it was never recommended either this story is so jot and underrated i wish

i could give it a 10 star it captures all the moments perfectly never has any romcom made me feel so hot

i admire kate but i hate that she has a very weak resolve to a man who calls her golddigger and whore she seems to get high on humiliation classic humiliation slut

and marcus is doing his job perfectly being the dom enjoying in her humiliation and every

embarrasesment as well as making her do every one of his bidding as he please

will there never be a 2nd part or is there any place where i can find it ?

A new fan of your work. Thanks for the delightful stories, regardless if it’s completed.

Plz complete the story,,🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺😮🥺😮😮🥺

Love this story needs a happy ending. Please finish.

Just stumbled upon this fabulous author, and unfinished but truly remarkable stories.

Dont think stories will be finished but I'm here for those 1et chapters that are a marvel in itself.

Dear author, do complete the stories if you please, they are sending readers crazy :)

Ugh. That will teach me to start a series without checking the authors’ page. Great start but since it’s been over 13 years, I’m guessing chapter 2 won’t be coming. :(

please finish the story ...

Such a great beginning deserves to be continued! Bravo! I felt that this story was amazing!

The part where he chased her got me so horny! Pls finish this! I want moar of Marcus!

Here's hoping a bit of encouragement in the form of a comment will prompt a chapter 2!

please finish ALL your stories, ive read and reread all of them so many times and im begging you PLEASE FINISH THEM

it's been years, a decade perhaps, since you published this and left everyone hanging. I am filled with sadness.

Please finish this story

This is such a good story I love it!!!! Please finish it!

Its so interesting story wish you could finish it

I hate that this account has been abandoned, and that the author just left stories with so much potential unfinished,

Jake broke off their "engagement".

It wasn't real anyway.

Jake and she were never a couple.

I don't think that they ever made love.

They were just friends.

Marcus loves her taste.

Marcus loves her. she loves Marcus.

As soon as Jake comes clean with Marcus he will not see her as a whore.

She didn't come to "catch" Jake or his brother.

So, they lived HEA.

can someone please finish this story, I think it's safe to say the author won't :(

Its beeen years please finish it noww.

its bloody brilliant can you atleast finish this entire series :)

WAITING :D

O M G I'm dying to find out how this ends! Making up my own ending is not the same. Plz finish this story. It's so good and intense!

This was definitely intense...loved it!!! Hope you get a chance to finish it at least...maybe :)

Please don't leave us hanging like this.

Yes please! Need more chapters asap!

Where is chapter 2

lov it plz keep it going

That is such a big cliffhanger!!! Sombody please write a sequel!!!!!!!!

You could find it in yourself to finish this lovely story line?

It's too good to stop now! Truly.

Love it. Please come back and finish.

I really hope you'll get back to this. Not only is it really hot, Marcus really makes me angry. I want a chapter where he doesn't just get to walk all over Kate. I guess the only part that doesn't seem to sit well with me is the fact that she didn't just tell the bastard that the fiancee thing was a ruse, haha. Would've cleared things up a hell of a lot faster!

I think this writer was abducted or something. PLEASE FINISH!!! If not can someone else please step up to the plate and let us all know where to find the rest of this story.

PLEASE!

Are you just going to let this happen to Kate? I mean, that's how you want this story to end? Please, try to finish this story... I want to know what happens next.

You seriously need to write another chapter I am loving this story and I want to know what happens next!!!

I've had enough of waiting now! Every single day i check the page hoping for the new chapter to be up. Please update soon....i'm dying for the next part. Thanks.

U have to finished this story please

what more do you need as commentary.

oh my wow you have to continue . . . please im sitting on the edge of my seat here

finish this story? We're all waiting to find out what happens.

You can't just leave it there! Dying to know everyone's reaction when all the truth comes out.

which is way better than nothing and more substantial. TK U MLJ LV NV

I just found your story, and I would love to see how the story ends! Please finish ;)

When will you write the second part of the story? It was great but I cannot wait to get more.

Will u finish this? or it never will??? I want to know what happens next...

Many thanks for this fine writing.

Just like Marcus... this story...

as i was resistant to enjoy it as much as i did, and was left... no... forced to also beg for more of it. Well done.

Please finish this story!!! It's so gooood!!

Continue and finish this!!! It's awesome

Please?

I need to know what happens next that was hot and almost left me satisfied but I need more!

why aren't there more stories like this apart from the ones you write? this needs to be finished!!

FINISH!!! I love the story :)

I see that you have not written anything since 2007, I hope that you get inspired again and decided to write. Your words were enjoyable and fresh to read and I hope you soon feel inspired to write more.

plz i cant wait to read the rest of it

I would love to see this finished. Please let me know if I should hold out hope :)

ARE you ever going to finish?

PLEASE FINISH!

i read this story a while ago and keep checking to see if there is a new part please end it i hate cliffhangers lol

Its a great story but I really wish you would finish it!!! Come on dont leave us hanging!

Tantalizing... more... please? : )

I'm literally dripping wet...I have such a longing between my thighs, it is inexplicable. Please, PLEASE finish this...it's driving me insane. It has been such a long time since I was so turned on by some erotic fiction....absolutely delicious.

you need to finish this!!!!! i can see that you have recently got on and have apologized for not coming and finishing your stories but this is your oppurtunity to do so... i like the way you right and im am practically beggin on my knees for you to finish this story (even tho you can't physically see this) so if it is possible before the new year it would be gr or even early next year it would be really great thank you :) !!!!!!!!!

would love for you to continue this one!

Great story

continue this please. this is such a cliffhanger!!! :)

I really hope you finish this!! You can just feel the heat between them (although I hope you don't take them to the "I love you/I love you too" point" because I think that wouldn't fit w/ what we've seen so gar but let them start something. It seems like you could extend this story or wrap it up quickly so.........please finish it!! :)

btw - I don't really see how this is a nonconsent - he hasn't forced her to do anything even if he has been overbearing.

OMGosh please update this story it is excellent :D

Why didn't you finish this?

Please finish this!!!!!!

more please!!! I like ur balance! you can feel the attraction but Kate also calls him on being a jackass too. I hope you have him have to work for it some since he has treated her badly fighting his own attraction- and of course write more!!!!!!!!!

What...no Chapter Two??

Guh.

My brain is just gone. Melted. You ROCK as a smutty writer - not just the smut, but like...everything. Where are you??

It's so depressing - why is it the best stories out there are effing unfinished??

Finish, bitte!

WHY ARE THERE NO MORE?!?????!?!?!?!?

please please please please please please please... how many pleases is that? Actually, doesn't matter, but PLEASE continue this story!!!

this torture i ove your stories your soo talented it a shame that there isn't any updats :'( please update soon

Please continue, your torturing me!!!!

I have read it I think around hundred times and each time I feel there should be a continuation but since it look like author is dead or what because it look like story is not going to continue and we will have to remain satisfy with this part only.

Please? Please?! PLEASE?! I'm on my knees BEGGING you to continue this story. PLEASEEEEE?!

I hope you finish some of your stuff.

this story is amzing. please finish it.

It's 2009! We're still waiting ... :'(

It's been since 2006 and you still haven't out up the sequel. its very good, so hurry and finish! please! dont leave you fans hanging or your lose them.

Love your work. Please make a part two.

dude, so hot i cant even type the title of my comment correctly... mmmhhmmm. i need a guy like marcus. i love your writing technique, because it isnt rushing into the sex/lovemaking, but building it to a climax. haha, climax. i wish male induced right now. okay, shutting up.

Great stuff.

I keep coming back hoping to find more

This story and Intense Love have been 2 of my favorites since first coming to this site. I hope one day you decide to finish this story, it's been great so far. I keep coming back to reread and check to see if you have any more chapters. Keep writing, you're very talented.

this story is so interesting, a truly atypical love story.

i really really really wish and hope you will finish it someday. would like to know how it ends for the couple. really love all the main characters, even the snake, too! want a satisfying ending for kate, she is so liberating.

marcus is delicious.

Thank you so much for what you have written so far, you have great talent, you should be published!! here's hoping to see many more stories from you! Cheers!!

Hi,one of your stories was recommended as being similar to one of mine, so I took the trouble to read. I feel pride that my own, although completely different in theme, should be compared to your own excellent writing. Well done I loved it and can't wait for your next chapter. You have certainly been logged in as a favourite.

Please finish, I am so hooked. Where did you come up with a name like Perdita for a snake?

How long till we see the rest of this story? I love it and I can not wait to see what happens next.

Obviously, the author is a big fan of bodice rippers. That said, she does the internal dialogue of her heroines well. The male characters... not so much. Nice that she uses proper grammar and puncuation; as that seems a skill set limited to about one out of thirty writers on this site.

when r u going to write the next chapter plz finish all ur stories dont leave us hanging around

Awesome story! Please conclude it!!! It's too good to leave unfinished!

Jeez, finish it already and tell us where you've put it or something.

Finnish this story. <3

it's a shame to leave such a great story at this..."sad face"

really hope that you will finish this story- have gotten totally sucked in! Love the characters, even love the stupid snake.

Please.

Clearly this is an author who likes fancy words but doesn't know how to use them correctly. A limp story and even limper sex.

SUPER intense! I had to read it three times before I could leave my computer! The characters are excellent, especially Marcus. Mysterious and intimidating without seeming creepy; and SOOOO hot! Ch. 2 is definitely in order! Bravo!!!

What's wrong with this girl. She P*es me off bigtime.

She's some kind of submissive I presume. Not being able to fend for herself. That guy as good as rapes her and all she does is to beg for more. Well my friend, try that in real life. BS sorry but this is not hot. This just make me mad.

I'm begging with the rest of 'em. lol loved and love your guys and gals.