All Comments on 'Somewhere Between Bliss and Ecstacy'

... but I had to go back and re-read a few paragraphs to see who the hell was Oliver. Turns out he's a typo, I guess.

It distracted from an otherwise hot story.

Enjoyed your story. Hope to read more from you.

My apologies, I changed the name halfway through writing and I obviously forgot to change a few.

Holy cats, he has three erections in a row with 8-inch penis; this is a very lucky girl indeed! Good imagination, author!

This is a very good start for a very promising author who should not let a few negative comments deter her from posting more of her work.

Hi,

I think your story was excellent except it needed that special something. I know sex has been described a zillion times but I felt you might have included something illicit or soemthing to get our pulses racing. I felt your writing skills are first-class but had read this story a hundred times. Just think if you had have had the girl yell, at the critical moment, "Oh, you are soo (whatever) but we're first cousins!!!"

I look forward to your next submission for you are very good.

Les.

Definitely seemed like beginners work, but still a great job! the name change was the biggest problem, but its ok for amateur writers to make mistakes! Thanks for sharing.

Definitely seemed like beginners work, but still a great job! the name change was the biggest problem, but its ok for amateur writers to make mistakes! Thanks for sharing.