All Comments on 'Son And Mother Became Best Lover'

But the author needs an editor.

I was disappointed that he didn't go down on his new wife, and give her an orgasm with his mouth and tongue,and lick her clean of all of her gooey come.

Thanks for the read.

was this posted some where else before as it seemed like a read the opening on a different story or atleast before? i didnt finish it then either.

You have a lot of good thoughts. Many good things will happen for you. just keep looking for opportunity

Nice "indianisation" of one of the stories here on Lit.

But it is a good adaptation and I would encourage you to please create more Idianised stories.

I certainly prefer it to your other story listed here, which is in Hindi and very hard to follow for those of us who have been out of the er.. Mother country for a long time:)

I also like how he kept calling his mother "ma." That's just a detail, though. What's great about the story is that the son married his mother. Now, as her young husband, her boy has a license to stick his big brown prick up her mommy-hole whenever and wherever the urge hits him. That wonderful hole between his mother's legs is now not only the nature-provided receptacle but also the legal receptacle for all the big doses of rich warm semen in his heavy brown balls. I heartily endorse his mother's insistence that from now on her boy's fat prick is reserved for her alone, just as his mommy's cunt is just for her son. On their honeymoon, the son will act like a young groom, with his stiff dick plugged up his mother's wet twat more than it's just hanging down between his legs. (If it were up to him, his dick would be permanently clamped to his mother's twat.) How much creamy sperm will the son be shooting up his mommy's cunt in the years ahead? Um, gallons and gallons?

You keep changing from first person to third person telling the story so apart from the spelling and grammar mistakes it's a little confusing to read.

It felt so good to finally be fucking my mom. I'd dreamt of it for two years, and it was finally happening. I was on top of her, her nice breasts smashed against my chest. My face over hers, my cock thrusting back, and forth, inside her sweet pussy. We kiss passionately as I start picking up speed, my thrusts becoming harder. Our lips part so our mouths are free to express our enjoyment, and pleasure. As my mom begins to cum, all I can think of fucking her, pounding into her pussy. The room is filled with the sounds of our sex. I keep on fucking her until the last pulse of my seed is deep inside her.

While embracing mother I could feel under my lungi that she wasn't wearing a petticoat or panty under her satin skin coloured saree.

My mother is 69 years old with mostly white hair. She isn't very good looking. Her face looks older than her age. She has wrinkles on her face. She is 5 feet 7 inch tall and quite fat. She weighs above 90 kgs. She belongs to a very high society. She always prefers wearing figure hugging skin coloured very thin sarees. She has many lesbian lovers older than her. I am her only male lover. She has stopped sleeping with my father for the last several months.

I'm 19 years old and sleep with my 69 years old mother, who's old enough to be my grandmother. Later she told me that she was actually my father's mother and had married her son. After which I was born.

She wears skin coloured sleeveless blouses that are completely open at the front ánd back. She wears noodle straps on her flimsy blouse. I told her to stop shaving her armpits. Among her high society lesbian lovers there are many air hostesses but I love her the most. Many foreign prostitutes and lesbian pornstars pool in their resources to have group lesbian sex with my mother. Maud Adams of Octopussy is one of my mother's favorite. ( CAN ANY ONE PLEASE ELABORATE ON THIS STORY)

Namratha sounded and looked too hot to be a mother. At least, she did not fu k him before marriage. Very. Very HOT.

Learn proper grammar or get someone who knows it to proof read your work. You switch back and forth between first and third person so often that I just couldn't finish reading the story. Sometimes you even did it in the same sentence. It totally ruins the story before the reader even gets to the second or third paragraph. Too bad.

Not a bad idea for a story jusr so poorly written by someone with very limited english

I loved it. a beautiful romantic story.

Very erotic and powerful, awesome.

How many children do you mom-son turned husband and wife have from your incestuous union?