by nlionman
That was a great start to what can be a wonder novel length, story. Are you up for the challenge? I sure hope so.
why do we allow anonymous posters? never any good is said by those cowards!
Why do we allow anonymous posters? To piss off people like you.
Coming from a perverted swinger that's a statement I would expect. Nothing new for this site.The pricks think because they have a fake name they are better than anybody else. Truth be known, guys like this are the real "troll's and assholes on this site.
The trolls are really trying hard are they not? Never mind those assholes. You have a great female domm insest story going. Keep up the good work. And though I am anon, I will tell you I am Kira Bangkok. I would like to see this branch out into other catagories. It would be hot for mommy to make him her sissy son, maybe even into the non consent category
i liked it, lots of possibilities. cross dressing, party favour, mommy/daddy servicing.....
Wow I love it...please continue...strapons...forced bi...sissification...pee play..etc. ..
This is a fantastic story so far, I would love to see it become a series. I eagerly wait for the next part!
I love the start so far. I am sure you can take this story in a lot of different directions.
You say that it is to be continued, but it's been over 4 months now since part 1 was released. I would LOVE to read more of this story, maybe have the father join in on fucking the son in the ass, them being bottoms for the mother, maybe have the mother call over some friends and have a gangbang on the two men, throw in some cbt and facesitting and other bdsm elements, you would have an AMAZING series on your hands. PLEASE WRITE MORE TO THIS!
I hope you are going to finish this I love the first part and can't wait to see what happens when his father gets involved.
Please continue but look over it after. Their were a few mistakes in the spelling and grammar. Real simple ones such as times it said crabbed instead of grabbed
While yes there were a grammar mistakes he did say in the beginning that English is not his first language. I have read plenty of stories on here and some are so bad I couldn't read them. We have all read stories like that. I think he did good job considering it's not his first language. Fyi not all anonymous people are assholes.
I wish we could get more of this story😭😭😭
I never get to the end cause I always finish myself
Thanks so much for all the great feedback and requests to continue the series. I will do so in the coming months. Maybe, I will first do a rework on part one.
As the series will continue it would also involve bisexuality male sex. Some of the comments suggest this already, but it might also be a turn off for others.
Feel free to add suggestions.
Mommie needs to properly train her boy with something deep and scary. 14 inches is deep, but when you've already inserted an 8 inch dildo that has disappeared, we're talking a different story.
Please continue without male sex or perhaps two versions. So hot with just the mom