All Comments on 'Son Fucks Daughter and Me Ch. 01'

Unlike those readers who just choose to criticize, I actually write here as well & post my stories for the world...

I do not think you should quit writing - in fact please don't - but you need to take advantage of the free services that editors here offer & have someone look over your stories before you publish them...

Please don't let the trolls get you down, keep writing & use an editor & your stories will definitely improve.

There was a lot of errors in grammar, and I am a volunteer editor for this website, so if you want my help after you have written a story, please email and ask for help. It is my pleasure to help anyone that needs and ask for help.

Don't even think about using ratman39 as an editor. His writing was at least as bad, if not worse than yours. Stick to your day job if you have one.

This needs a lot of work. (That is being as nice as I can be).