by beaverhunt
...and not really erotic unless you're are a sadist!
Well Anonymous it may be sadistic, but its only a story. I like it, and she is coming around to it as well. I suspect that Part II will be very revealing. Lets wait and see how things turn out. After all, mom made a choice to allow this. She didn't have too; she could have confronted it and the story could have gone in several other directions.
Regardless of some comments, you're a good writer. So many criticize but could never write anything near as good.
I liked it and wonder just where your imagination will take things.