All Comments on 'Sons & Lovers Pt. 01'

simply beautiful

I am well aware of the times, being of the age of the son. Loved it, now waiting on the rest of the story...

Fantastic!

Love your build up left me wanting more.

Welcome Back!! Awesome start. Looking forward to more of this

Cannot wait for the story to be continued!!

WOW! Superb writing.

As others commented, can't wait for part II! Would love to see the illustrated version. What a hot milf!! Great build up. Maybe they could bring in one of the hot older neighbors for a threesome, and have the older milf introduce her own son to the pleasures of m/s loving. Great potential here.

A very good start to this story, I'm looking forward to more... Thank you!

Looking forward to reading more. Thank you.

A tender story of !ove. So realistic in the thoughts of taboo desire evolving. I've been reading (and experienced) since 1974 and this is one of the best.

Three pages wasted.

Please write another chapter or eight!

Hard to believe someone thought this was “3 pages wasted.” I was sucked in (pun intended) because of the excellent writing ability. Looking forward to future chapters.

The next time they are alone he needs to fill her cunt with his seed

What a fantastic story! I was absorbed by this tale, beautifully written, wonderful use of language, great interplay between the main characters, and the plot was actually believable too. Makes me want to read the next chapter, and soon. I gave it an easy 5 Stars, most deserving.

Looking forward to find out how it turned out with the characters. Very hooking. Great start

Is the next part ready yet? Wow, what a story. I love the details of the 70s that you've woven in, the slow burn you've created between mother and son, and the underlying love that's growing into something much more than either ever expected. Brilliant work! Also, is the next part ready yet? How about now? :D

Cannot wait for part 2. This was excellently written

Superbly told story - just the right amount of longing and hard sex

Excellent story. Thanks.

Your word usage is Wonderful!

Cant wait for part 2

Excellent story. Done very well.

You have got to go visit his college for the weekend soon.

And be sure to tell us about your adventure !!

Perfect Story, I love it, 5 stars. Please. submit part 2. I can not wait longer !

Sensual, erotic, and intimate incestuous love story between mother and son. The emotional and sexual epiphany between mother and son was beautifully and logical developed. 5-star series.

Mother and son deserve part 2 ;)

absolutely deserve a part 2 and 3

hot

Cant wait for pt,2

Mother and her lover story, beautifully scripted.

One of the hottest, sweetest stories on Lit, hats off to the writer, neck craning to see birds.

Absolutely beautiful!!

What a wonderful read, full of excitement and loveliness.

You are truly a talented writer, and I thank you wholeheartedly.

While the fact of the lapse of over two years is not conducive to a continuation of this beautiful story of love, I will still hold out hope as to what their future holds.

I see a divorce happening, that allows the beautiful classy Marie and the adoring Greg to set up a loving home together.

A small quaint one bedroom cottage out away from town on a wooded lot with a pretty yard and some colorful flowers that match the color of the love that they have for each other, as they adore and cherish each other in meaningful monogamy for the rest of their lives.

It could be that good and meaningful! Will you grant us this lovely satisfaction?

I can only hope......

Sincerely,

B4PW.

Beautiful story, can't wait for part 2 and more