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by Vampladydi

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WMDeanWMDeanabout 14 years ago
Nice!

Short & sweet. Even not giving them names contributed to the spontaneous feeling.

msmaggiemsmaggieabout 14 years ago
Excellent!

Really enjoyed it. Loved the anticipation.

Size13Size13about 14 years ago
Incredible prose...

The spontaneous building of tension and passion is amazing.

ww79ww79almost 14 years ago
I love what you are aiming at but I think there are too many words

The title says it:- Prose excels, ideas great, but we have to concentrate too much on the words too relax with the ideas.

ww79.....

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