by sequitir
This made no sense! It seemed to be just aimless thoughts. Next time have some semblance of a story line . . . if there is a next time.
The jumpiness of the action is a bit disconcerting. I liked where the story started but it got to the end so fast the story never got a chance to take off.
It is like the author was double parked, and they wanted to hurry to finish writing the story. It's a good story line/theme, and could be a very good extended chapter story. I like the idea of him fucking both his sister and his mom, and would like to see if the author could develop some hot sex scenes for those hot pussies. Thanks....Rich
Okay, the story could have been longer and maybe more coherent. But still, the basic fact is that the author is on the right wave length. He's exploring the topic of sons fucking their own mothers! It's the second oldest story in the world! A son has a big hard on for his mother and Mom needs her boy's hard young dick up where it'll do the most good, where it BELONGS!--up the same twat her boy came out of 18 or so years ago! Son blows his balls up his mother's sweet cunt, and Mom cums like she never has before! What we need are more stories from this talented writer.