All Comments on 'Sopping Wet'

But still, if possible try working on your writing skills. But I still like it & I did enjoy reading it. So, keep on writing =)

Great start to, hopefully, a great writing stint or, at least, a series! Please give us, at least, a sequel.

But work on your basic english skills a little. 'Grinded' is not a word. You should have used 'ground'. Make sure to triple check your grammar and spelling. Other than that, good start!

Very sexy story, but "allot" is a different word than what you've intended. What you mean should be "a lot". Looking forward to reading more!

Your story would be alot better if you used proper grammar and spelled correctly.

Of all the stories I hav read this is the least graphic and least interesting. It needs way more details. How did they cum so much whn all we know is they fingered eachother? Bottom line is more details are needed to write a sex story. This had very little sex in it at all.

Loved the story ever though it wasn't long enough

There's so many possibilities for you to continue the story

There wasn't enough of the story for me to decide on how many stars to give you

I'll wait for more of the story before I make my decision

Please do continue writing more