All Comments on 'Sore Feet'

Liked the story. Good flow, interesting plot, fun to read. Watch the editing a bit more closely though.

Keep writing stories with your style and ideas....I'll sure read them all.

good balance, great storyline, lifelike emotional content, made me check my feet for blisters... congratulations

A little corny plot line, but good work writing plausible dialogue lines, or monologue if you insist..

I stopped up at the blaring horn in the fog - very visual writing! Well done.

Makes me want to read other stories from you.

Hey you made me cry....there goes my male ego. Thanks a bunch Hotti!

This has shades of a story I wroke, several life times ago, but never thought anyone would be interested in reading. I think I was wrong. You have a deadbeat dad, I wasn't allowed access to my children. Cheer up. The future is brighter, even with the fog, my daughter moved in with me 18 months ago. She moved out of her mother's house 8 years ago to attend university, and it took that long to build the courage to disobey her mother. But it happened. Best of luck. And keep writing.