by Da_Captain
A very good chapter I was less keen on the previouse chapters but you covered anal very well in this chapter and I loved that. I think she'd have shed a few tears though.
looking forward to the rest of the series! Hope he nails them all. You did anal well, hope there's a repeat
Dude where did you learn to write? There are times it reads like a fourteen year old who has discovered what sex is. Descriptions of the women are typical male strereotype triumphalism of success with a female: crude and tasteless. Minus five