All Comments on 'Sorority Surprise'

Great premise, but please invest a bit more time into "believability".

Most of these characters are too keen on doing sex stuff, and the siblings for sure had no problems with it.

Your story so your rules, but yeah.

Great job! So hot. Would love to see them again with her new sisters.

It was great but I didn't really like the whole group sex thing! If you continue the story just leave it that the brother and sister is having sex with each other and no one else.

Well written, as a fellow writer of stories…go where the story takes you.

please write more of these people.

You lost me with his “just short of 8 inches“. Nothing like making him bigger than 99.9% of the worlds population.

As others said, It was really lacking in the believability department.

8's not so crazy, Ben, it's the 12's and 13's that annoy me. Usually I'd prefer no numbers and just see how the characters react to get a feel for what's what, but in the context of him telling her so she could ID it without prior exposure, it made perfect sense.

And hey, looks like they won't need to pretend to break up now!

loved it

Wish I'd had a sister ;-(