by fsqueeze
The story is flowing at a good pace and very likeable characters. Do continue, thank you fsqueeze.
I’m captivated. Very well written, great flow, really likable characters. I can’t wait to read more!
I'm enjoying every word of this well-crafted, well-written series! Keep up the good work!
Fun little story. Can't believe he's got her Blowing him, and taking cock up her butt already. Turning her into the perfect woman. Five Stars!
I have been reading stories on this site for 10 years. I have never left a comment before but I just wanted to say this is one of the best I have ever read. Looking forward to the next part!
It's definitely a fun read, but I don't know, I feel like the sex feels kind of out of place. I get that it's literotica, and you do address the skeevy nature of it in the story itself both through the protagonist and by trying to rationalize it, but I think the story would have been better if it wasn't a part of it. Still though, very well written.