All Comments on 'Sosoni Ch. 04'

Great story! Thank-you!

I looked first thing every morning for the end of your story,

Thank you for this pleasant story

You have a gift for story telling. I hope you will write more stories in the future.

Thoroughly enjoyed this offering. Many thanks.

Absolutely a wonderful story. Thank you for the hours of pleasure. Five stars!

Absolutely a wonderful story. Thank you for the many hours of pleasurable reading. Five stars!

Superbly written! Thank you!

Mystery, tragedy, adventure, danger, crazy sex and what a happy ending, full of love. Sosoni is unlike any character I've ever read here, so 5 stars for originality alone.

Thanks for the great story.

It was a great story. The ending almost ruined it for me though. He has all that money and he can't somehow fight them or get a lawyer? No explanation on why they tried to take Sosoni away from him? Also the dream like state he thought he was in? Very weird stuff.

Ch. 04 was interesting, which can be either good or bad. This is good. It reminded me of the movie Jacob's Ladder, with Tim Robbins.

Overall, I loved the story.

Just a little bit short of the best story I have read on the site. Well done. If you are not already familiar with it I urge you to read the story of Ishi and his demise.

Yup, another great series. I need to take a couple of days of vacation so I can read through all your stories, I've gotten no work done today. Just a really great read.

I enjoyed this series from start to finish. One of the best on the site.

Great series.I waited until the end before commenting. Very interesting characters. Loved the premise of the story and the pace. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Loved reading it, thanks for writing it.

Very inventive. Excellent character development of the principals. Probably the learning process would have taken a lot longer. Feral children are very, very hard to civilize, if at all. Still, not really a flaw -- it's a story, after all. I wish you could get some real recognition for this. 💥 💥 💥 💥 💥

I love a happy endings...I love sexual tension, and drama. This story has it all! I was so afraid it was going to end badly, but I loved the way you brought it all together for a wonderful climax.

How long have I reading the erotica on this site. 10 years? More? I've never commented and I keep no history. Your story was unexpectedly moving. One of the best ever. Please continue to write.

Tnis guy is a multi millionaire . Why didn't he hire a team of lawyers after the kidnapping and shooting to represent his and Sonsoni's interests? Just saying it would have been money well spent instead of letting goverment walk all over him and her.

yeah, you're the best I've ever read on this site. All of them.

Amazing story that was sexy and hot, but truly pulled at your heart. Don't stop writing!

Wonderful story, your creativity is amazing!

One helluva story. Thanks FS I came to your story by way of searching Lakota. Glad I did.

Amazing story!!! Write more!

Yes, thank you!

Bill

You are really great, your story made me read whole of it in one go. Thanks for shari.g💐🙏💐. A friend

This story has, bar none, the most unique and inventive premise of any that I’ve read on Lit. I inhaled it in one long afternoon and evening. Easy 5 stars.

I enjoyed this wonderful fairy tale. it was a pleasant escape from this current crazy world.

Fun story. I enjoyed it. Thanks.

Well done!

I have rarely ever seen a story go so far off the rails. WTF?? Didn't bother to finish it, just skimmed over the end to see what was there. I enjoyed the story up to the kidnap and killing. Again WHAT THE F

Came for a wank, but drawn in by the story. First time commenting on Lit in more than 10 years of casual browsing. Amazing.

I read your series about 3 years ago. I was enthralled with the story then, and I still am now.

What a magnificent story start to finish

Phew, what a story, what a writer!!! Hats off to you! This is the most amazing and powerful story I have read here. Your imagination, storyline, language and style all point to a very very accomplished and creative writer.

Hope we will keep benefitting from your fertile brain and pen.