by partwolf
good story, well written and good character buildup. Still find the date/POV jumps a little distracting and the end is inconsistent for letting the young women back to her pre-demonic posession. But, a little happy-ensing gets never old; so thank you for publishing
I don’t understand why Ingrid/Frances didn’t age and turn to dust when the demon was drawn out. That’s what happened to the woman before her, and after a thousand years her teen body should have been long gone.
Wow ,that was great, love how they all got what they wanted. Looking forward to the next big thing you do.