All Comments on 'Sounds Good Ch. 06'

by AspernEssling

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BBeinhartBBeinhartover 4 years ago
WOW!

This just gets more and more amazing!

Kosova_guyKosova_guyover 4 years ago
What a beautiful story?

Honestly, this is so heartfelt and well-told. You are a gifted writer, very imaginative and clever and true.

MisterWildCardMisterWildCardover 4 years ago
Excellent.

I'm really enjoying this series. Thank you for writing it, and I look forward to more of it.

TornConflictTornConflictover 4 years ago

Once again you have told and amazingly compelling story that kept me glued to my screen. I hope that I may one day weave a story as heart warming as one of yours. Keep up writing and I will keep reading.

mithanialmithanialover 4 years ago

Loved it as well as the others.

mordbrandmordbrandover 4 years ago
Yes!

wuv, tru wuv, will fowow you foweva

DrizdartDrizdartover 4 years ago

Delightful, on-going development of characters. Realistic handling of their backstories and moments of revelation about the personality development from key episodes.

This is excellent -- and when you are done with the story, I'm sure I will be going back and re-reading from the start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Amazing

The build up to this moment has been as the title said, amazing. You tell such interesting and intricate stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Excellent

Love your stories. You continue to grow in your writing. This was your best so far. There are a few stories on this site that have characters with chllenges however the way you approached Dan without throwing out his MD early on was masterful. Like the development of the games characters, we have the slow reveal of Dan. Thank you for sharing with us.

doofus67doofus67over 4 years ago

Wonderful!

Not only is it a nice progression of the story, but more importantly the way you related the hardships both characters have had to endure whilst growing up with such emotion was so well done. Thanks for sharing this

fafhrd09fafhrd09over 4 years ago
Dammit!

Any story where I get to the end of the story and swear like a sailor because the next part is not available deserves the five stars. :)

FuddyDuddyDudeFuddyDuddyDudeover 4 years ago

Sir,

Damn can you write.

Your characters. The emotion...

I love you man.

Never stop.

Be well.

FDD

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Oh no....

There's another part. Why couldn't you stop it here; I know something goes wrong later. Best of luck to the characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Filligree sliver butterflies and raindrops of gold...

who knew porn could read like real life?

who knew porn could have a heart?

who knew porn could tug at emotions and feel genuinely uplifting?

Nicely done! Bravo!

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Still writing. More to come. For those who are interested: you may have noticed that I mention music fairly often. That's because I tend to listen to music while I write, so that certain artists/albums become associated with certain stories. Here are some of the connections. G...

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