by AspernEssling
Honestly, this is so heartfelt and well-told. You are a gifted writer, very imaginative and clever and true.
I'm really enjoying this series. Thank you for writing it, and I look forward to more of it.
Once again you have told and amazingly compelling story that kept me glued to my screen. I hope that I may one day weave a story as heart warming as one of yours. Keep up writing and I will keep reading.
Delightful, on-going development of characters. Realistic handling of their backstories and moments of revelation about the personality development from key episodes.
This is excellent -- and when you are done with the story, I'm sure I will be going back and re-reading from the start.
The build up to this moment has been as the title said, amazing. You tell such interesting and intricate stories.
Love your stories. You continue to grow in your writing. This was your best so far. There are a few stories on this site that have characters with chllenges however the way you approached Dan without throwing out his MD early on was masterful. Like the development of the games characters, we have the slow reveal of Dan. Thank you for sharing with us.
Wonderful!
Not only is it a nice progression of the story, but more importantly the way you related the hardships both characters have had to endure whilst growing up with such emotion was so well done. Thanks for sharing this
Any story where I get to the end of the story and swear like a sailor because the next part is not available deserves the five stars. :)
Sir,
Damn can you write.
Your characters. The emotion...
I love you man.
Never stop.
Be well.
FDD
There's another part. Why couldn't you stop it here; I know something goes wrong later. Best of luck to the characters.
Filligree sliver butterflies and raindrops of gold...
who knew porn could read like real life?
who knew porn could have a heart?
who knew porn could tug at emotions and feel genuinely uplifting?
Nicely done! Bravo!