All Comments on 'Sourpuss!'

sorry but it just doesn't hold up.

reads like feminist wank rags that are too stained to hold regular ink.

plus if she was excreting stomach acid it would be burning all sorts of things. clothes, inside of her thighs, pads, tampons ... and it wouldn't kill anyone, just really fucking piss them off. the more I think about this story, the dumber it gets. you should probably stop writing if this is the best you can do.

To each his own. One commenter didn't like your story. I did.

I thought the explanation, misplaced stomach cells, was plausible. My Uncle had two extra teeth. They were discovered when he had a pan x-ray.

I don’t know why people are so harsh. This was thoughtful. My only suggestion is to watch the repetitive scenes. She did the exact thing every time.

I rarely give you a 4 star rating. It definitely was fantasy. None of it was plausible. And the ending was abrupt. I think the next part of the story would have been the best.