All Comments on 'South of the Border'

by Bob0069_77

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abiostudent3abiostudent3over 2 years ago

It's a cute little story, but you didn't understand the category.

Science fiction & fantasy is about the fantasy *genre*... Elves and dwarves and magic and the like.

Not about characters having their personal fantasies fulfilled.

This belongs in a category like 'Erotic Couplings.'

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice short story but wrong category. When it says fantasy it means like Orcs and Elves, not simple attraction fantasies. Should be in Erotic Couplings or something, your story will do better there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Belongs in "erotic ouplings, IMHO. Otherwise decent first effort.

Bob0069_77Bob0069_77over 2 years agoAuthor

Appreciate your comments. Is it possible to switch categories?

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