All Comments on 'Southbound Ch. 03-04'
by coaster2
- 7 Comments
Anonymousover 9 years agoHow long before there is more to the story than a plastic wrap company story?
Anonymousover 9 years agoNo need to hurry into the good stuff, lead us into the backgraund and let us get used to the characters. I also like that we learn about the characters through dialog.
Anonymousover 9 years agoAs a ex engineer who has been in both the paper and the plastics industry, this very well written story has a special appeal for me. I read and enjoyed many of your stories, though you lost me with the Golf story.
I am sharing my computer so I can't register at the moment but I shall sign my comments in the future as
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redlion75over 9 years agowasnt this posted before with him seeing like 4 women then losing all but 1 at a steady pace to other lovers?
connoisseur29over 9 years agoGood writing and I hope getting better. Interesting tale. Thanks. Cheers!
bruce22over 9 years agoFiona sounds like a winner. You know it would be a bit more complicated if she had a long-term love interest. Why didn't Ruth try pick him up on the rebound? There should be more problem employees lieing around and I am sure that the dynamic duo will start also sorts of rumours about the take over.
