All Comments on 'Southbound Ch. 15-16'

Thank you for another great chapter. I'm thoroughly enjoying your story.

even though I never thought I'd be into a story about plastic & laminates wrapping/packaging.

You always seem to write such readable stories. This is no exception. It seems familiar to me. Have you posted it on some other web site?

Note we have here some of the happiest moments and some of the saddest moments

in the story in this chapter. I wonder if the brothers are going to reappear. They should be busy building up their own new client list, but....

it was a bit off a copy out with Carla's tumor. Was this to suggest, that it was to explain her behavior? Most couples grow apart in time, those that work hard at it will grow to a new understanding of what love means to them. As you get older love is a choice not the emotions of youth. Every one is different and as time goes on we can become even more so but if you loved someone enough to get married you should care enough for them to find that companionship or relationship that will provide a bond of caring and love. The author has shown Carla as an uncaring spouse throwing away her lover because she was not prepared to work at her relationship. I have seen this so many times in the people around me in real life. I'm sure a lot of this is inspired by some ideal they got from TV or a magazine articular as to what "the love of their life" should be to them. Finding they don't feel that way they abandoning their marriages and go out to find what they have been missing only to find they already had it. So sad. T

Beautifully written, simple language is always the best