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gregsjlngregsjlnover 6 years ago
uggh

Longer plz cliff hanger master

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 6 years ago
These are a good length

Grammar is so bad that I would get a headache trying to battle through any more.

Story is good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good, but needs content?

I really like this series. However, I feel like it's being rushed. I wish the author would have slowed down a little bit and fleshed out the characters some. The battles are hurried. It's almost like the author is sprinting towards the end instead of just enjoying the journey.

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