All Comments on 'Spa Time with Busty Sister-in-Law'

This story is nowhere near finished, no stars until it is

Chapter 2 please

Who is Carla?

World champion of run-on sentences. Author has zero clue about sentence structure, or when and where to use the '.' in any of the attempts to form one.

Wife was also watching the feed from the pool camera.

Great story, well written now needs a part 2.

Looking forward to seeing what's next.

To be continued?

I hope the wife gets involved too.

Great story. I hope their will be a part two with his wife, or maybe bring in Carla instead of just dreaming about her.

Great warmup. Where's chapter 2?

Crappy way to end it.

I love spontaneous sex, esp. blowjobs. Good read. I could almost visualize this entire event. Keep writing.

Very nice story with enough description and continuity to allow the reader to feels as if he/she is there watching all the action. More please!!

Cameras operated by a phone app? Couldn't Danielle have enjoyed the luxury of watching her hung husband and busty sister fuck? After all... it seemed like Danielle was arranging it...