by WorldlyGal
What happens next? Is Anya on the pill? Will the parents find out? Will they get involved? (lots of people love whole family stories, do you?) And speaking about the parents, exactly what kind of party are they attending at Ignacio's place? Just think, the month long vacation just started - so many questions to answer. I hope you continue the story so that at least some of these questions can be answered. <p>Joe
The story really seemed to taper off in quality as you approached the major subject matter. A lot of the descriptions which made me keep reading the first half of the story disappeared. And as far as I know, or at least in so much as I hope, people do not yell OMG, they yell Oh my god.
Great start to this story. Lets get the whole family envolved. Will be waiting for part two.
Nice start to this story, need to bring mom and dad into the mix as they are off swinging with their local friend :).
You need to get thier ages correct, if he is Anya's older brother he can't be playing ball in High School..when she graduated
How else do I describe it. More trash for the pedophiles. Lock 'em all up and throw away the key.
kind of disturbing and romantic at the same time