All Comments on 'Spanish Summer'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good start.

What happens next? Is Anya on the pill? Will the parents find out? Will they get involved? (lots of people love whole family stories, do you?) And speaking about the parents, exactly what kind of party are they attending at Ignacio's place? Just think, the month long vacation just started - so many questions to answer. I hope you continue the story so that at least some of these questions can be answered. <p>Joe

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I agree.

I agree great start. Needs another chapter or two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Started so well...

The story really seemed to taper off in quality as you approached the major subject matter. A lot of the descriptions which made me keep reading the first half of the story disappeared. And as far as I know, or at least in so much as I hope, people do not yell OMG, they yell Oh my god.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
love it

Great start to this story. Lets get the whole family envolved. Will be waiting for part two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
nice start looking for part 2

Nice start to this story, need to bring mom and dad into the mix as they are off swinging with their local friend :).

You need to get thier ages correct, if he is Anya's older brother he can't be playing ball in High School..when she graduated

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Garbage

How else do I describe it. More trash for the pedophiles. Lock 'em all up and throw away the key.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
sick and dark with a twist of romance

kind of disturbing and romantic at the same time

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Very nice! Please continue.

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