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by GenevieveHarte

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flink_og_rar_mandflink_og_rar_mandabout 4 years ago
Not erotic at all.

Text very well written but not at all erotic stimulating.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great initiation....Chapter two??

Disagree with other comment....very subtle and insidious .... Lucy WILL be 'enjoying' this weight loss program...I am sure she will have a hard time at first, which will incur MORE humiliation, exposure and pain..... but, equally sure that she will persevere, lose weight, transform, as did her friend, and maybe even get invited to "instruct"... Love to see Lucy getting a maintenance spanking from her good friend (more added humiliation?) and then to be assigned to correct her friend, when she's slipped!! SO many possibilities.... BRAVO

mioelcidmioelcidabout 4 years ago
Waiting for more chapters

I second the last comment and I hope that much more will come

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Write more!!!

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userGenevieveHarte@GenevieveHarte
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Writer and Ghost Writer. Second book will be published in October. Reviewer for Diva Magazine. Articles published in Scotsman and on various on-line sites. Third book (first erotica) now underway.