All Comments on 'Spark & Stone - Ch. 01'

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DevonCowboyDevonCowboyalmost 5 years ago

A lot of potential - I like the initial set up so keep it going

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

I can already tell I am gong to LOVE this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Loveee

I love your writing, your detailed description taken me into the story, so vivid and so freaking hot. Cant wait ti see where this story and fist to the heart goes

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Such a cute story!

OMG, I'm so happy to see this story here! I am reading it on Laura's Patreon, and there are many chapters there, over 20 I think, and it's such a great read! Aidan is so cute, and Heathcliff is a bit of a bastard, but they are just soooo good together. I won't give anyone any spoilers - not to ruin your fun - but I can tell you it's a really good story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Second time around...

... just as good as the first! <3 And interesting to see all the little details missed the first time...

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Chancem77Chancem77over 4 years ago
Nice

Great story. I'll read more when I have the time, but really like the way it's written. Strong characters. Really liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Heathcliff is very unlikable. Arrogant, disrespectful, and a real asshole for not even knowing Matt’s actual name. Hope he’s not such a prick through this whole story. His personality definitely levels his looks and other redeeming qualities.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Is it the arrogant slutt top and innocent virgin bottom story again?

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