All Comments on 'Spark & Stone - Ch. 06'

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1moeannie1moeannieover 4 years ago
Loving this story.

So interesting. The dynamic is great.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Im sorry but what is this obsession with the “master” and “slave” or “pet” or whatever form of degradation in every one of your stories? Truly curious. Also this illusion of the short frail innocent bottom and the big muscular aggressive top is too much of a cliché nowadays don’t you think? I’m a short thin top, all my boyfriends had been taller muscular bottoms, literally by coincidence, just saying, also vers guys are kind of lacking on your stories, we need more of those too, just an honest observation. Good writing style though, no matter how you “say” things they never “sound” vulgar, really nice.

dnsontndnsontnover 2 years ago

Hey Anonymous below this comment: this is a work of fiction. This is an expression, a creation, of the Author’s (vivid) imagination. Take two minutes to create a profile if you want to create conversation. Don’t snipe at great FREE reading material. I’m more interested in the ‘beautiful mouth’ line. Seems a little “Deliverance” and made me laugh out loud. Five Stars, of course, and I’ve been Following for awhile. Great chapter!!

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