by eidetic
I haven't yet finished your story (which I started by reading the first chapter), but I had to give you a shout out for including a Princess Bride reference. It is one of, if not my most favorite movie of all time. I don't think I could do the entire movie dialogue without a cheat sheet, but I could get pretty far.
Anyway, thanks for including such a great memory. Remember, "if you haven't got your health, you haven't got anything"
Warm regards,
Mel
Thank you for sharing Eidetic. Both of these stories have well developed characters and a great storyline. I hope we do not have to wait a year to find out what happens.
Don't rush writing. Keep the quality and make the next installment worth the wait.
From one dinosaur geek to another.
GHreader