All Comments on 'Sparking A Fire Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
No comments on this very hot story?

Well, let me be the first. This is great stuff, capturing the characters' voices and emotions, not just their sexuality. In some alternate world, I could see this playing out on the TV show, and that makes it all the more arousing. You can actually see and hear the real Kara and Alex in your head, not just porned-up imitations. Kudos!

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