All Comments on 'Speak to Me Ch. 02'

The story is hot, the sex is hot and he's complaining? Seriously, take his balls out of his purse, fuck her, masterbate with her but for fucks sake quit talking about it.

Lots of sex good story but, you are getting too long winded--get to the point.

Why are they both so up tight in sharing their feeling with the other? Why in the hell didn't he just go down on her when she was rubbing herself to an orgasm? He could have licked her while she fingered herself.They need to stop being so close-mouthed about their sexual needs. Thanks for the story.....Rich

<p>How are you going to say that there's lots of sex and it's a good story, and then tell me to get to the point? Stories have every right to be "long-winded", all the fun in reading them is, hello, <b>reading them</b>.</p>

<p><b>From what I have seen so far, this is the way you all want the story to go:</b><br />

<i>He took her clothes off, exposing her big tits. He took her pants off, exposing her pussy. He stuck his cock in her pussy. She moaned. She had an orgasm. He had an orgasm.</i></p>

<p>Does anyone read?</p>

<p>I write this material for personal reasons, and I am well-enough rewarded that I don't intend to stop anytime soon. I share it here because I might as well do something with it once it's written, and I like the name "Literotica" - it appears to be a blending of the words "literature" and "erotica". It seems, however, that "literature" is less appreciated than the name suggests.</p>

<p>My stories <b>have</b> sex. They aren't <b>about</b> sex. This is the story of a married couple discovering that they have never known each other as well as they assumed they did. The sex scenes, hopefully, leave the reader in the mood to have sex. <b>Mark that statement, please.</b> "...in the mood to <i>have sex</i>." I understand that we all spend a little bit of our private time at the computer desk, but I'm <b>not writing for that</b>.</p>

<p>The one critic I care most about likes her stories to be stories. There are only so many ways to describe and narrate the hot scenes - it's all the stuff outside them that makes a story unique. If you aren't enjoying all the extra narrative, why the hell are you reading? Go watch a video.</p>

<p>...for finally getting it.</p>

Amazingly intimate. I really wonder how many couples really talk about it. If we are to believe the macho types, "real men" know without ever asking anything the "truth". Actually all of us could use an education about our partner's sexuality. Really fine writing...

you have an amazing writing style but there is no chance that you can do it right for everyone. :-) so concentrate on what you do best writing, creating an ambience that no other author did create so far. thanks for sharing this story. V

I apologize for not realizing that you really knew what you were doing when writing this story. All that dialogue, the persistent, annoying questioning by the husband... I wanted to shout, "Leave her alone!" But you have plotted something very different and intimate, and now I'll return to Chapter 1

knowing that this is simply one story about one marriage. And after reading both chapters again, I'll eagerly await Chapter 3.

Living with such a calculating, manipulative lying bitch must be torture. This is why most men watch sports and drink beer! Try to have the balls to talk to youir wife and you get hung out to dry on the guilt cross!

hey dude ,

i just loved ur marvelous piece of lovely sexual literature showing a very natural relationship between a couple . . the story was just so lovely .

i just wonder why u have not updated further on the story . . pl update the remaining sweet parts of the story dude

By RMRedfall....

"WTF

How are you going to say that there's lots of sex and it's a good story, and then tell me to get to the point? Stories have every right to be "long-winded", all the fun in reading them is, hello, reading them.

From what I have seen so far, this is the way you all want the story to go:

He took her clothes off, exposing her big tits. He took her pants off, exposing her pussy. He stuck his cock in her pussy. She moaned. She had an orgasm. He had an orgasm.

Does anyone read?

I write this material for personal reasons, and I am well-enough rewarded that I don't intend to stop anytime soon. I share it here because I might as well do something with it once it's written, and I like the name "Literotica" - it appears to be a blending of the words "literature" and "erotica". It seems, however, that "literature" is less appreciated than the name suggests.

My stories have sex. They aren't about sex. This is the story of a married couple discovering that they have never known each other as well as they assumed they did. The sex scenes, hopefully, leave the reader in the mood to have sex. Mark that statement, please. "...in the mood to have sex." I understand that we all spend a little bit of our private time at the computer desk, but I'm not writing for that.

The one critic I care most about likes her stories to be stories. There are only so many ways to describe and narrate the hot scenes - it's all the stuff outside them that makes a story unique. If you aren't enjoying all the extra narrative, why the hell are you reading? Go watch a video."

Get your head out of your ass! My God you are full of yourself and you couldn't even finish your fucking long winded bullshit! Or is it you ran out of steam after realising how fucking boring your story really is!

Note to the author - you get to write what you want to write and tell your story how you want to fucking tell it. People - an in anon's - don't realize it takes 3-5 hours a page to write a story. Not counting plot lines but including rewrites.

Wow - I want to know what happens next but this story's been abandoned since 2009

...that you are unable to finish what you have begun! Simple as that. Do not start what you cannot end.

Was the author's skin too thin to take the criticism that is inherent in the LW section? If so, that is too bad. It was avery good story. I hope nothing is wrong health-wise with the author.

I think probably he couldn't take the criticism, which was amplified because of the arrogance displayed in his intro's and comment section-that is always red meat for the LW peanut gallery.

Funniest is how this mental occurrence is happening so late in their relationship - not that I find anything "wrong" with it. It just seems the author has arrived at some personal revelation and decided to build a big story about some little issue (that really isn't an issue, but gives pause for one if by a sudden stroke of luck that person wakes from a coma...).

Essentially it seems much ado about nothing.

..this is not meant as the story's end? I hope not as, so far, it is the best story I have ever read in literotica. By far. Bar none.

This story is terrific. Extremely well-written and unusual. Top notch.

OK, you won the prize... for the most boring snooze producing patter on this site.

"Honey? Why do you keep wanting to ruin everything by talking about it?" Exactly. The protagonist needs to see a therapist.

You, Sir, are a very good and talented writer. Please keep writing. Wish I had a marriage like yours. Another well deserved 5 stars.