All Comments on 'Special Delivery'

by TheOxRocks

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
special delivery !!

Lucky prick lol, !! Now thats a special delivery !! Most guys would work the job for free with extras like he got !!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
chapter 3?

Would be a nice addition

TheOxRocksTheOxRocksabout 8 years agoAuthor
Chapter 3

Unless you have a suggestion, the well may be running dry with this storyline. Thoughts, guys? Maybe Jodi DOES start whoring Mike out?

wings65wings65about 8 years ago
maybe they become a couple

after a series of hook ups they get serious and maybe get married ?

TLMorganTLMorganabout 8 years ago

This story fell short from your first one. I wanted to know more about Jodi. Perhaps a prelude story about Jodi growing up and some of her encounters. That would be nice.

Aeolius64Aeolius64about 8 years ago

i like the idea of jodi and mike hooking up again. i also like to think of this series having a happy ending, like where they fall in love or something. i get the impression she's fallen for him, and that she won't be able to stay away from him. i'd also imagine that mike cares about her more than he realizes

wings65wings65about 8 years ago
is there going to be more?

Have you started another chapter of the store yet?

TheOxRocksTheOxRocksabout 8 years agoAuthor
Awaiting approval...

New chapter of the story uploaded yesterday. There is a fourth part - the finale - being written. Thanks for your interest.

CynredeCynredeover 5 years ago
My type of girls...

Holy damn... now if only they'd use medicine to keep Mike going, and if there's just a girl who'd absolutely love blowing his cock over and over again, then I think I'll just read that for the rest of my life.

MarkT63MarkT6311 months ago

Why on earth would Mike not be in HEAVEN???!!! These big girls must be virgins. He has a 6 inch dick for Petes sake!!!

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