All Comments on 'Special School Pt. 03'

You're half way through a six part story and so far it seems more like a manual than a story. The tone is pedantic and it makes me feel like I'm in school. That's not an especially good feeling. The story lacks humor and is almost devoid of dialogue which gives it an impersonal impression. The sexual activities are described well but they seem too generic since they lack a real connection with the main character. Try putting a little more life into the next chapters. Something unexpected.