All Comments on 'Speedy Delivery'

Nice build. The characters are fun. I would have liked some more sex, though.

I loved it!!!!

one of my favorite reads to date

Yes! I thoroughly enjoyed this. I love happy endings.

Loved it! I loved a slow, romantic story. Thanks.

Anybody else catch the references? Annie is listening to Michael Jackson in her room. Miranda keeps asking, "Annie are you OK?" and "Are you OK Annie?" Annie's bike is stolen by a very stealthy thief, a "smooth criminal" if you will. Ha! Loved it!

A great little story, WP, I loved every word of it. It made me smile a lot, even made me chuckle several times. This is one of those Literotica stories that everyone should read just for sheer pleasure. Let's have a lot more like this one from you---I promise I'll read every one.

Wow! Apparently I hit the right combination with this story. This one has gotten more votes in just a few days than anything else I have written, and it still maintains a very high rating. This story was different than my usual style and I'm so glad that you guys like it. I had a great time getting to know Miranda and Annie! --WP

I so totally loved this. Absolutely perfect story.

I thought this series is much better than your other one, I really liked they way they went into business together, I guess fate had stepped in to make this happen

I've enjoyed this little story, brought a smile to my face.

I truly enjoyed this story! thank you very much for sharing it with us!

I always loved long stories that have a nice buildup. Though your story is not too long but still I love the way it's told actually. The pace is nice and easy and there's no rush, nothing extravagant, just a simple little love story. Hope you decide on next chapters, I would like to read more of them

........... thinking that I had read all your stories, so I have no idea how this one slipped me by.

A nice, sweet, simple tale, yet I have to wonder how many people have come together as partners with such a simple act of kindness as the loan of a bike (ok, maybe not such an expensive one, lol).

As for the "Annie to tower" internal monologue, I can actually envisage someone have an inner conversation with themselves in this fashion.

Absolutely Delightful!!

This was an amazingly wonderful story to read and I intensely enjoyed the dialogue. These cute and sexy romance stories, with 1 or 2 sensual sex scenes are definitely my favorite reads. I hope that in the future you will offer more of these type stories, written in the 2-4 page range.

The Storyline, conversations and all other aspects of this brief love love story were just delightful & definitely 5*-Star Rated!!!!!

a pleasure to read. nice characters, smooth story ,well written, kind people, sex great and the happy ending.WOW a very nice story , an example.

thank you and stay safe

Merry Christmas

Such a cool story! Nice that you could vary your tone and evoke the 'hood girl's voice in the narration.

So warm and endearing a story! Lovely characters. Would love a sequel, if you have the inspiration.

There's no sequel to this one, but I do have other stories in the same vein. Check my profile page where I have them categorized as Sweet Romance.