All Comments on 'Spell Book Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice mix of story and sex

SomethingOfAStrangerSomethingOfAStrangerover 2 years ago

This seems like a really fun story so far! I’d love to see how much of this problem they have is nature versus nurture. Like, men realizing that they have magic and are suddenly marked for death acting out of desperation versus people with magic who are men going full cackling evil wizard more often than not. Honestly I wouldn’t trust like 80% of the men I know with sudden magical power but I doubt they’d all turn into Saruman after 24 hours

gumbyshugumbyshuover 2 years agoAuthor

Working on Chapter 4 right now. It needs a LOT of work, so please be patient with me. Thanks for all the support!

Rdk781Rdk781over 2 years ago

Found this story today have read all 3 chapters...love the mix/build up of the story ..YES MORE PLEASE!!

FerrumitzalFerrumitzalover 2 years ago

Very fun. It'll be neat to see how he handles a full-on harem of witches, all bound to them through boinking.

And what exactly is the power level of the Merlin? Men are stronger than women, but by how much? Orders of magnitude, or more like how men in general are just stronger than women? How much of his ability is innate or instinctual, such as in a life-saving instance when bruisers crash through the door and start muttering spells?

Honestly, I hope the story has another hundred chapters. Hurry up with #4!

cliqueggecliqueggeover 2 years ago

enjoying it - looking forward to the next chapter - thank you

lrdhawkwindlrdhawkwindover 2 years ago

Very cool can't wait for the next chapter

diecastdan67diecastdan67over 2 years ago

Waiting patiently for chapter 4. Hope it come soon. Awesome Story so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

More please.

gumbyshugumbyshuover 2 years agoAuthor

More is coming! Chapter 4 should finally be up in the next day or so. We get some questions answered and our trio comes to a big decision. Sorry this one took so long, I've been working on a few things for my Patreon (which I'm trying to get up and running by the end of the month), and I had to basically rewrite this one to expand and include a few fun things. Hopefully it'll be worth the wait, I'm working on Chapter 5 right now, so the wait for that one shouldn't be three flippin weeks. Ugh.

bhojobhojoabout 2 years ago

Liked the use of emojis in the chats. Was a nice touch

gkrishnagkrishna7 months ago

Cally doesn't bother giving the apartment manager her full proper name. She orders a magic book through fucking post. She dragged him into this whole mess and put his life at risk. And she has the audacity to yell at him as if he's done something wrong? I don't like how she gets a free pass with that bullshit, as if callously insisting they kill him - for her mistake - is something so easily brushed off.

ClearmuseClearmuseabout 1 month ago

Thoroughly enjoying.

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