All Comments on 'Spellman Ch. 17'

1) There is a quite enjoyable podcast called "I Only Listen To The Mountain Goats" that immediately came to mind.

2) If you are a spice rat you skip "Thai Hot" and ask for it "as hot as the chef's granddad claimed to eat it."

3) This has been an amazing series and I look forward to the continuation.

Ohhhh damm life is getting complicated for poor Ryan.

Cece or throw Thomas under the bus and scoop up Riley!!!!

I totally love this series.

But man, oh man, is Ryan fucked.

What Anonymouse said!

I don't care whether you go for Riley or not, you have got to throw that bastard Thomas under the bus. Frankly backing up the bus and running over him two or three times wouldn't hurt.

Totally saw that coming when the dude said he couldn't go through with it. Hope the author gives Ryan enough of a backbone to rat the douchebag out...

Rooting for the CeCe relationship myself...she's the only one who seems stable and trustworthy in this circus Ryan calls his lovelife.

This chapter solidifies only Riley or Cece as viable possibilities, especially given how all the other "girls" got thrown out of the club (at least you've hinted about that explanation). The fact they all puked their guts out eliminates them as good candidates. You're at least putting Cece on "simmer," and that's reasonable. Give readers time to breathe and to place their bets. You steered Riley to take out her anger on Tiffany, and you finally introduced Thomas and his hot-tailed T.A. At least none of the other professors are keen on it, and Ryan's inclined to tell Riley for sure.

This is an improvement, and I'm glad to see it, as you had some pretty good content a few times, and it just needed some shaping. 4

Team Riley from the beginning, although Cece is really nice. I love what you‘re doing here, it‘s a fantastic series. Please keep going!

loved it I wish the chapters were longer I really enjoy them.

You have too many relationships going and zero romance. You are very close to making Ryan an unlikeable character and have totally succeeded in making Riley unsalvageable. It's getting boring and repetitive, and with NO romance.

Excellent stories!! And I’m rooting for Cece.

What Anonymous said about the previous Anonymous.

Please link the chapters together

Swear to God, if Ryan ends up with the bitch that ghosted then tried to control him, I'm gonna be horribly pissed that I wasted my time on this story.

So many people but set up in such a way that it’s easily followable. I am rooting for Cece but hope Riley winds up ok. Although I am still waiting for Amanda to show up

@Anon - RE: Linking chapters.

I think it's a site error, I've seen multiple times where the series 'tab' isn't present when it's been present on previous chapters in the series, and even then it might reappear on further chapters; it's fickle and temperamental.

What an incredible twist especially how you wrote it. “Thomas isn’t it?” Sublime. Absolutely sublime

"Yeah we're poly but don't talk to my partner about it" has to be the dumbest cover I've ever heard. Believable that Thomas would think he could get away with it though.