All Comments on 'Spending Time with Grandmother'

Erotic story I have read on this site,in fact it is on a par with some of the real classic erotica of Victorian times. Author you prove the point that its possible to write on such a subject without resorting to crude language;well done,I would suggest that you publish a book of erotica and include ,"After The Ball" and "It Happens in Wartime."

Wonderful Story. One of what it can be like no matter who the recepiant may be. Adults loving each other completely.

Old Cheshire =^;^=

<p>The grandmother is seduced by a client, then discovers she is bisexual. She then goes to her husband who is appalled that she has broken her vows. Grandmother recognizes this, yet sees that love trumps all vows and her sense of honor. </p>

<p>Her husband tells his daughter and son-in-law and the rest of the family. The family promptly shuns this faithless spouse, this woman without honor. Moreover, of course this woman sees no problem with her actions, none. She says she loved husband, though there is no evidence of this, no remorse no regret.</p>

<p>Why should I like this character? And why should I like this grandson? This young man implies that the response to her infidelity was merely an act of homophobia. Is the character that shallow? Is he so interested in getting in her knickers, that he will agree with everything she says?</p>

<p>What politically correct nonsense! </p>

<p><b>This stereotype of gay people without honor is most disturbing.</b> In the era when gays may indeed find access to marriage or at least civil rights, to suggest that they are faithless, without honor and pure hedonists does everyone a disservice. Shame on you!</p>

I loved your story, the slow building of their relationship, I look forward to seeing where it goes to from here.

This is an practical example of how erotic stories should be written! I was fascinated by the creativity exhibited by the author in the tactical and vivid approach typical of a real love story. The story keeps one in suspence and yearning for more. Keep it up and please submit some more..

I never read one of your stories that I did not like. This one was just exceptional. Thanks for another fine story.

What a sensitive, sensual story. Loved the premise. Everything seemed just right in your narrative. I like more explicit language during bedroom scenes, but that is my thing. It doesn't have to be yours. Overall, well done.

Great story and very well written and so very sexy with out being crude a true love story.

What is your problem ? this is a wonderful piece of literature and having studied English this is a work of Art get over it .

HELLUVA story!!!!!!!!!!,,,,,,Kept me hard!!!!!!!!!

It's not the length but the lack of interest in either of the pair. It's as if we joined the story midway and have no idea who these people are and why we should share their emotions.

Sorry, just seemed to ramble on about a relationship with the absent/dead lover we never knew.

As I said, the story is very moveing. Enjoyed it very much . More a romantic one than anything else. I

though it very well reveling , about the chartcters. It became a very beautiful l relationship . A better story than a lust only , type of story.

What an absolutely moving and beautiful story! You really brought the characters to life with excellent descriptors and dialogue. I would love to read more!

it took a lot for her to bury her past and heartache but she finally got to do it with him...and long may they enjoy each other....vice is nice but incest is best - such a beautiful taleof their unfolding love for each other and so gentle too.....loved it....one of your better stories....

This is a deliciously erotic story, BUT, the incestuous theme of it which was it's raison 'd'etre, was badly diluted by him calling her Sally instead of the correct term of Granny. Apart from that, it was beautifully written...

A really beautiful piece of work. This is how a story should be written. 5 stars all the way.

Excellent, heart warming, intimate. sensual, tender and sooooo loving. You painted a deep and intense loving picture. Thank you...

Such a wonderfully well done job of masterfully spinning a wonderful tale of love, loss, and rebirth. Two very complex characters developed and brought forth and developed into true lovers was done with great skill and caring by the author. Truly a joy to read, even if a little more sex would have been nice, and perhaps anther chapter or two. A job truly well done!!

A lovely storey. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

A wonderful story. Thank you.

"[grandma's] breasts [...] gave the impression of being those of a well bosomed eighteen year old girl"

Oh, come on! Not even flat chested 18yo, a "well bosomed" one!

And how can this guy mistake 8km/h, barely faster than a brisk walk, for 20km/h?

Well written but a bit too melancholy for me.

Beautifully written. I want to meet Sally.