All Comments on 'Spending V in the Neighborhood of G'

by MSTarot

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Nicely Done

Thank you !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Good

Silly title, sorry, but it says it all - good story, well written. No sex, so probably not good enough to win, but definitely good enough to read and share. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Piano Man

As an ex pro Guitar Player , This story Ticks all the boxes for me . So Atmospheric , and the kick in the last paragraph was genius , never saw that coming ! Loved it !

rnebularrnebularabout 7 years ago
Very nice change of pace

Initially was worried that an older style like this would be a tough read, but glad I kept at it. The story was one of the more original that I have read recently, and worth all 5* I can give. Thanks for sharing!

rightbankrightbankabout 7 years ago
a melancholy lament

with a twist.

To call it a period piece is insufficient. Noir would be more accurate. Nicely done MSTarot, nicely done.

teedeedubteedeedubabout 7 years ago
Good story

I love that song. Diana Krall does a great cover. Good to read you again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I like it!

Please keep writing, you definitely have a gift.

Thanks!

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