All Comments on 'Spin Ch. 01'

Yeah I'm gonna need more of this story please...

LOVE! What a great story & great characters. Your writing is outstanding! Please--keep going!

So glad you’re writing again

I love it, I hope these two go a lot further soon. They both have what it takes for a full steamy relationship. Hope to read the next chapter soon. Well done

Nice slow burn that's turning into a flame. And yeah, Kyle is a dick, but we all have friends like him. Looking forward to chapter 2. Thanks for really touching story.

what the 1st anon said.....

more pleasw

I love this so far! Their chemistry is really authentic and fun.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Great writing style. Enjoyed the read and of course the character development. Thanks.

A fantastically well written story that had enjoyable character development as well as some hot scenes. Can't wait for Chapter 2

You have my full attention. Looking forward to seeing where this goes. A whole lot of possibilities, no doubt

I agree, their chemistry is authentic and fun!

I’m into this story. Makes me tingly Bring it on please

More! I need more! They’re such a cute couple!

I loved it and them and I want more.

As the song said, MORE MORE MORE HOW DO YOU LIKE IT? 👍

Fantastic beginning!

If sexy Gus can have hairy arms, can he also have the beginnings of a bit of sexy chest hair?

My heart melted. This was too cute and fucking hot. Gus is so cute and Jackie is a sweetheart.

Re reading again. It’s so good !!!

it seems I have come across another gem of a story :) this is outstanding!

Fucking brilliant! You're a gorgeous writer. More of these two, please!