All Comments on 'Spinal Meningitis is No Joke Ch. 06'

maybe beth has always loved her brother this way but tried to date other people because she was sure she could never have him but now that he has nearly died she got the courage to do something about it. ps please add any got the snip or is infertile to stop any incest babies.

Every chapter is better than the last. Keep up the great work man!

You are one of the best story tellers on Literotica, Well done. Great storyline. Worthy of ten stars !!

Awesome series. Good storyline, and only one of two slip-ups with names. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more chapters.

Taken to te next level, waiting for more! Ten Stars And An Award For Story Line/Writing Abilities. :-)

I really hope we see more soon! This has been a good,hot and passionate read so far!!

i really can't see this being just a 6 part story, we need to hear if he gets his sister, leanne and his mother. great story so far

Tremendous story. I really enjoyed it. Please continue!!

Our oh so caring professionals!

Great writing, going where I expected it to. However, how in the bloody hell would he know all that about Leanne and Steve. In high school, shit changes fast and don't say he learned it while in the hospital. He had no cellphone, there was never any mention of a laptop, and he certainly didn't borrow someone else's phone.

Also, where the heck did "Lynn" come from?

Beautiful young women forcing themselves on this high school kid! He might get seriously fucked up in the head with all this.

It was corny, he was weak willed and and lame

@manoblue you're ridiculous. This isn't your fantasy version of you, this is Josh, and his life has taken one crazy (mostly awesome and sexy, but still crazy) turn after another.

He went out as a wimpy nerd and has had very little social time to adjust that world view.

Lexx just reiterated that Josh's mind still hovers at the edge of disbelief... a pretty reasonable response in my opinion!

To have his literal Dream Girl give him orders that are just as surreal as they are sexy makes him Smart to follow them, not wimpy!

The last part was just stupid and if the mc got intimidated by that then he is just pathetic.

Leanne sucks as a chastity and whatsup with telling what he can and cant do.. allowing you to fuck my best friend? Wtf its his sister! Dude is a walking dildo now they can do whatever they want with him.. dude even refused his sister snd suddenly she jumps on him again out of nowhere?

I like this story but I think the author should care about details. He changes Leanne's name at least twice. At least once in a previous chapter he fu*** Jenny in the pus***, however now we are told that she let him fu** her ass and her mouth because her pus** is only for her husband. I think author could correct this easily and the story would have less flaws. However we cannot be too exigent given we are given the story for free, for what I thank the author.

Dude!!! She's your SISTER!!!!

There's some name drift. Leanne becomes Lynne a few times.

Not a fan of the Dom/Sub bit with Leanne. Also kind of concerned Mom is going to be revealed as the town bicycle (everyone's had a ride), given what was hinted at in the interaction with Leanne, and the fact that she "networks really well" and knows absolutely everyone in town.

WTF Leanne needs to chill. 1) He's being great with his sister and 2) he's supposed to be her patient, not Beth.

So I’ve stuck with this story and this is my second time trying to finish it, but the incest/taboo side of things is just not my bag baby. Having a younger sister, there’s just something icky about thinking of her like that, so I’m out, I’m not marking it down because *I* started reading it knowing it had those elements in it (unlike some commenters). Regards, Ppfzz. 4⭐️

I'm fine with all except why is Leanne so upset with him? He's the one in recovery. Her bias us too harsh.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

Purplefizz : Beth is his older sister not younger.

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