All Comments on 'Spit Ch. 01'

Sure wish I had a daughter

Simply awesome! One of the best stories ever!!

Is she there now?

A good story. More fact than fiction I shouldn’t wonder.

Naughty, naughty and hot. It might be the firm name of a group of pornographers, only it is the one-man firm of Scrudato. A genius of porn!

That was very well done!

So fucking hot.

Out Fucking STANDING!!!

FDD

I've been able to finish only one of his books. Had to hold a gun to my head in order to be able to finish that one. The most boring writer ever.

Your story, however, was much more interesting than any of Hemmingway's..

By the by, You like to use "spend." Reminds me of a kid saying " I rubbed my thing."

Spend. SPEND?????

Sounds like some little boy that doesn't want to say "naughty words" in front of his parents.

Nice

Really wanted to finish reading this, but the cadence just doesn't work for me, really like the premise tho, maybe one day, I’ll come back and try again... Also, Sade didn't sing Unbreak My Heart Toni Braxton did.

5 stars. Zoe should dress up in sexy lingerie for Daddy. Sheer bra, satin garterbelt, sheer stockings with frilly ankle sox and heels that she keeps on while fucking Daddy.

Dirty talking fuck slut telling Daddy how much she loves fucking and how she's thought about fucking Daddy for a long time. Can't believe they are finally fucking. Telling him how she loves his cock. How she wants his hot cum all over her face and wants to drink daddy's deposit.

Oh and one more thing

Toni Braxton sings Unbreak My Heart. Not Sade and it's pop RnB not jazz.