All Comments on 'Spit Ch. 03'

That was hot and well written. Keep up the good work!

You do owe her. And mom should make up for doing Dan wrong. And Jan had two kids, I think. The other is probably a daughter. Lots of cross training.

One continuity issue, in that Zoe was introduced to Sapphic love by Pam, so she was no lesbian virgin with Jan. Otherwise, rollicking good fun.

Great family story and with Aunt Pam aware maybe it can continue?

HAWT AF!

Please, please keep this story going! It can't be over, yet!

I like your story, but if you are writing a series the components of the story must remain constant. My point is in episode 1 daughter stated she had experienced more than one pussy-licking. In this episode, if I read it correctly, she had never been with another woman. The components do not fit together.

Keep writing. You have an interesting style.

I loved the story but one glaring mistake. When she’s with the girlfriend claims first time with a woman. In chapter one she tells her dad first woman was her aunt and then says not her last. Mistakes like that ruin the story for me. The sex was great throughout

Trailer park trash

[10.11.22]

Fun series!

11/10!!!!!