All Comments on 'Spreading Seeds Ch. 16'

...of the story. I did see a minor error where bowel was used in place of bowl several times, but that was nowhere near enough to detract from the enjoyment I have derived from reading your work.

I agree very much with the previous comment, although I must admit that - apart from the 'bowels' they were eating from - there are some additional detractions / distractions that do diminish enjoyment. They're mainly minor ones but they add up and make me suggest getting an editor in order to improve reading pleasure for those Literotica reader that are literate. Where does the story take place: Barney or Burney?