All Comments on 'Spring Break'

OMG! Well, I'm moved to tears with this ending, I really wasn't expecting that. I thought for sure, Bell was going to blow off Toby again, hurting him once more. The one rock from the pair was a really nice touch. I didn't really think "The Lighthouse" was going to have a sequel. Now I'm left hoping that you continue this story even further. Again, this was beautifully written with great descriptions, worth a lot more than just *****. Thanks, MLF

Totally loved your story! The connection between Bell and Toby instantly re-kindled and hotter than before!! Brilliant!!

Although this chapter was not as hurtful, Bell still seems very untrustworthy and like he’s using Toby because he knows he can. He didn’t mention his asshole behavior at all and when Toby finally pushed him he gave vague incomplete responses. And Toby let him get away with it. I’m more intrigued by what happened to Carey that led to the wreck and after - and Apollo and the barista. And Micah seems like a mystery. What’s the history there? I don’t think Bell is at all good for Toby so I hope Toby finds someone who really cares, respects and loves him.

Good story. In some ways felt sorry for Toby. Been thru pretty much a similar thing years ago. Was used as a fuck toy by a couple then they tried to clean out my house. Cops saw them packing up my belongings at 6am and checked them out. Got my stuff back but that really hurt.