All Comments on 'Spring Break Chaperones'

Loved it! Just wished that it was longer detailing each day of their vacation. Five stars and a favorite point!

Great start. Hope there will be a chapter 2.

First Sentence has a large error. If I notice one that big right in the first sentence I wont read it as the rest is likely a mess also... Answer me this? Who's husband died of a heart attack? aha!!!

You start your story out with Carol's husband passed away.

When Denise's husband had died. I started off confused. 3 stars.

Great story. But Carol and Denise names get mixed up at times. Need a better editor. Sentence 3 right at the start.

A decent 5* story. A bit more detail would have been nice, but...

Not really sure how I feel about the boys friends but they didn't play a big part in the story so...

Hot!! I knew it would progress to f/d,m/s once the adults had their threeway. Since Mike and Charley were brought in,it would seem fitting to have them seduce their moms and provide more fuel for the orgy fires. Would love to see the illustrated version! Bring in hot deaconess or other neighborhood folks;possibly a hot gilf. Plenty of potential here. I will return to this one!

Like one of my favorite 70's songs, More, More, More!

The irony of the great unbreakable taboo being any breach of the absurdly delayed drinking age, while all involved get up to whatever other shenanigans. God “bless” America…

I got confused as to who was who, and which lost their husband, and what was happening before the end of the 2nd paragraph... didn't read any further.

Loved it please cont.

Robin is a boy, Robyn a girl...

@Anonymous: Not true, regarding the spelling of the male and female versions of the name. There are famous people with the name Robin as well as Robyn, with no prejudice as far as gender. Lots of examples of both.

With so many characters, I had difficulty sorting out who is who as far as relationships. The author apparently had the same problem in several places throughout the story. I think a neat trick would be to group names of related characters to sections of the alphabet, i.e., Alisson, Carol, Bob, David, etc. in one family. Another family could be Sue, Tom, Ron, Vickie in another family. It will simplify things for everyone.

more please

Un-readable. Please fix the dead husband at the beginning and give everyone last names and some humanity.

Now this one could use a sequel!!