All Comments on 'Spring Break "Shifting"'

Not too lengthy, not too short.... story worked its way up to a nice climax.

yes, it was.

One point during the sex scene you changed from past tense to present. Fix that and that will be a-okay.

Where did that come from? A few wrong words as the intensity grew, but I skimmed over them, lost in the story. Nice job!!

Well written but I personally don't go for stories about infidelity, because it has happened to me in the real world.

I enjoyed the story greatly, but definitely could use some pre-posting editing to fix grammar/spelling.