All Comments on 'Spring Break with The Sisters Ch. 01'

Well, No Answer

That was pretty good.

Look forward to the next chapter.

Its good start. Don't stop writing

I’m hooked. Want to read more of this story.

When you get there...First Things First!

You can unpack later! :+)))

And a girl who is hoping that her second time is better than her first. As others have said, a good start. I thought the two main characters were introduced quite well, the story was competently constructed, and it was well written.

The title says 'Spring Break with the Sisters', which suggests variety for our young lad as further episodes emerge. I hope he learns how to make it good for them all, as Bonnie's experience with her first boy wasn't a good one. She seems very hopeful about her next one.

Congratulations, Ejxxx on your first submission. Your biographical notes are uninformative, which is unfortunate. (Perhaps a couple of details sometime?) I find it helps to understand a story when I know something about the author.

Lue