All Comments on 'Springbreak with My Brother'

I am amzed at their staying power but glad that they did screw each other as they have been apart since being young kids. I sure hope there is more on his Spring break with his sister. HOT !!!

Didn’t expect that ending. Hope there are more chapters to come for the “new lifestyle”!

That suggest daddy/daughter an automatic 1 star from me...

I more or less liked this but found the inconsistent tenses a bit annoying. If you're going to use first person present tense then stick with it - switching to first person past tense every other paragraph is just confusing and makes the story harder to read.

Your story idea was pretty good, though bringing mom and dad into the mix doesn't interest me in the least. Thanks for sharing.

" on my knees between his legs I wipe the corner of my map" - needs some editing (tense changes too)

Got a couple paragraphs in and had to stop. Who forgets what their slightly younger brother looks like after 4 years? Absolutely moronic. Zero stars if that was possible.

Loved the brother and sister making love .

Can’t wait for Mom and Dad to join.

Can’t wait for the next chapter

Very good and really hot story. Nice reveal at the end, that would be a great follow up.

You had a 5 right up to the last paragraph. This one was much better than your first. But then you just had to go and ruin the entire thing with Kristian having sex with the parents. That dropped it down to a 2/5. 😠

way to ruin a solid story with that drivel at the end

Can't wait to hear more.

[16.11.23]

hawt, haWT, HAWT!

11/10!!!!!